You used tabit...
TABIT FOR FUCK SAKES!!!!!!!!!!
What the fuck is tabit?
There's nothing wrong with the vocal melodies it's just that the vocals are far more prominent than everything else. Other than that, pretty damn good
Over all, pretty good
The only thing stopping this from being a masterpiece is that god forsaken bass drum. It's WAY too prominent in comparison to everything else. My advice to you is to see if you can find a torrent (or just buy) of addictive drums. They have an enormous soundbank and you can individually tweak each aspect of the drum, it's a really fantastic program. Other than that this is a superb song. Keep it up
That's beautiful! I own AD, I just didn't use it in this. I could go back any time and adjust the levels.
I think I may end up doing that, just for you.
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